My holiday wiriting

Walt: Recount our experience of our holiday or Immersion Assembl Yea Holiday is here on the first week of holiday me and my sister angel went for our game at mount roskill.When we were at mount roskill we were training for our first game before we started we watched the girls and boy mixed team.After we finished watching the girls and boys mixed team we went and did training with our coach marzel after that it was our turn to play our game against holy cross.On our first game we lost by one point after that game we had morning tea after that we had to train again when we were training we were learning how to run straight and rep there tags.After that game we versed against prospect girls and won against them and made it into the finals.

 In the finals we versed holy cross and we lost after that game we shaked hands and went to go and meet one of the players from the blues.After we finished meeting one of the blues we had a sausage sizzle and went home to have a shower.After i had a shower i went back to school to wait for miss vaafusuaga' so we can go and watch the blues game when we all got there we buyed hot chips.Then the blues were versing the sharks when they were playing the game the sharks were coming first and then.


 When it was nearly the end of the game the blues won my twenty points and the sharks lost by two points. On the second of holidays i went to my auntys house because it was my little niece birthday what we did for the birthday we went to a pools that is far away it was so cool because.They had a slide that goes very long and when you come out of the slide you jump into the pool and when you jump.Out you might scrum after we played on the slide we had lunch and jumped back into the pool after the pools we went back to my aunty house when we got back we went to kentucky Fried Chicken.