Friday, 24 February 2017

Why we need to drink water

Plan for a  piece of explanation writing.

Why people need to drink water.

We need water to survive and also we need water to drink to keep us Strong and healthy. Also we need water for are Kinsey. Even if you have Caner water can help sometimes. When the water goes into your body The water make your body nice and healthy.

When you drink a cup of water. The water helps clean yourself and even it can clean your blood in  your kidneys . also water can help with all Kind of sickness like cancer or drinking too much wine.

when you're feeling sick the best thing to is drink lost of water when you drink water every hour you start to be more better.


  1. Kia Ora Penny,
    You have made a great start with your Explanation writing - you have a title and good ideas about why we need to drink water. I look forward to reading more of your writing!