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Monday, 14 March 2016

My Dictagloss Week 7


WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word .

Captain morgan addins was a tyrant. A pirate bent on causing may heaven havice across the seven seas. But also an enemy of british empire. Along with his crew they had broughten smaller ships this will change with curst treasure of baby james loved it.

Friday, 11 March 2016

Cat at the beach

WALT: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help.

Image result for cat at the beachIt was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.
Byron was sad because he just found out that his grandma had  passed away. He was so sad he did not know how she died” “Johnson” said  “she is old she might have been very sick. 


Johnson was trying to cheer up Byron he could not stop thinking about how much fun he had with his grandma. His grandma bought every single thing that Byron wanted. Byron looked after his grandma when she was sick.On the second day Byron didn't cry he remembered that he kept a photo of his grandma. He was happy he played with Johnson He asked Byron Are you still sad said Johnson? No I am not sad anymore said Byron.


“Why the long face?" asked Johnson are you hungry.Byron replied no thanks but i am sad because my friends are being mean to me.Why can’t you play with me we can play handball with my cousin said Jason , “Ok “.said Byron so they went and played with the ball and that's who Byron was happy.After they finish playing they went fishing for there dinner and there breakfest.

Mount Taranaki

WALT: Share facts and information about Mt Taranaki.

My Dictagloss Wk 6

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word .

Zack was Exsacticked  also curiously”.  What was a light shining  Arma doing in the middle of the forest ?. Little lone wanting to play with “dragons”.Didn't he know their meant  to  be Enemies after all.Surely he was up to something.

My score out of 15 is:15/15

Monday, 7 March 2016

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

Zack was ecstic but also carries what was a night and shine army doing out in the middle of the  forest. Let alone wanting to play with the dragons didn't he no they were meant to be enemies after all. Shorley he was up to something and it was up to zack to find out this night out terea motive.  


My score out of 15 is:6/15

Tuesday, 1 March 2016