Monday, 29 February 2016

Adding with Near Doubles

Walt: Use Double and Near Doubles to Add

Writing Test

One day there was a boy named James and he was going to school. When he got in class he went to go put his bag away when he went to go put his bag away he saw a person disappear.Then James kept on walking to his class to get his Chromebook and then his friends Chromebook disappeared.James asked his friends what going on his friends replied and said people are disappearing James replied that is strange.

Kathy replied to James lets go and find why are these people disappearing away James replied most of the children in the school is disappearing. Kathy replied why is this happening James said i think there is something going on in our class. Why the children went to go play outside a man came and took two child from one of the classes.
Then James and Kathy ran and told the principal that a man came in our school and took  two child's from this school.

Then Mr Burt rang the police and told them that a random man came in the school.After that the police went to search around the parks but they weren't there.So then they checked all around the houses and then they found the two child's. In.In a car raped around there legs and the mouth and there arms so the the police untied them and took them home.

T1 Dictagloss

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

Something strange was happening one by one things were disappearing first my mum then my dad then my sister.They were all gone it was my jobs to investigate there stunned Disappearance and find the Solution.

My score out of 10 is:10/6

Friday, 26 February 2016

T1 Dictogloss

WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing

Maxs can see from the distance a family that where at each other's throats. The father was yelling how can you forget the food which the mother replied it was a honest mistake.

Wednesday, 24 February 2016

Friday, 19 February 2016

Narrative Writing

WaltNarrate a story that includes an orientation, problem and solution.

Start your writing here:
One day there once was a boy named James who travelled a long way to a camping site.The camping site was very deep in a forest.   While they were making there way there, they notice that they were surrounded  by a lake and it was riddled with mosquitoes.

While James was out collecting wood for the fire, he came across a family that had forgotten their food. “Excuse me boy” said the mother, “my family and I have forgotten to bring some food for our camping”. “Could you please let us borrow some food for our lunch and dinner and we will give it back?”.

James was speechless “Um let me go ask my father if we can give use some food to borrow.When i ask dad for some food for the family near by he said yes.So we took the food to the family and then ate with the family.After that we went all the way back to our camping site.Then it was night time so we went and did the fire and when the fire was on we were having conversation about when we a happy.After that we went to sleep in our tent. HOPE YOU ENJOY

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Adding detail

WALT: improve simple sentences by adding details or interesting words.

Wednesday, 17 February 2016

Monday, 15 February 2016

Thursday, 11 February 2016

The Three Little Pigs

WaltDescribe characters from the Three Little Pig.

Wednesday, 10 February 2016

All About Me 2016

Walt: Share some information about ourselves.

The Three Little Pigs

WaltDescribe characters from the Three Little Pigs
Here a some words that describe these characters

Tuesday, 9 February 2016


  1. What is another name for jandals? flip flops

  1. Why are jandals also known as flip flops? because the sound

  1. When was the first jandal made and by who? Egyptians in 1,500 B.Cl

  1. When do people mostly wear jandals? summer

  1. What are jandals made out of? rubber