On friday morning we had a assembly about anzac. On anzac day we were celebrating the Soldiers that fighted against the germans that had the wars. when the Soldiers and germans died were they had the world war one some poppies started growing.They were a bright red, a dark black,a light yellow.
The soldiers that died on the poppies some of them were alive and when they came back home some of their families were waiting for them to come back home but the soldiers that was alive they saw their family.there were some soldiers that came home with one leg and one arm and some of them came home all right.
The first thing i did well was i did deleting some of my Anzac writing and thinking.of more sentence and putting some more capital letters in.My writing has got punctuation in it but I am so proud of myself that this is the first time that I have done 2+ for my writing.When my writing is finish i make sure that it makes sens for othe people to go on my blog.I have realised that i should have more sentences and punctuation at the end. of my sentences and put some capital letters at the beginning of my story and putting more detail.The next time i write i have to put more writing in my story.My goal for writing is putting more detail and capital letters i have chosen. This because i have chosen to be a good write because its fun to do writing and all kind of feature or you would wanna be it when you grow up.
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