Friday, 11 March 2016

Cat at the beach

WALT: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help.

Image result for cat at the beachIt was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.
Byron was sad because he just found out that his grandma had  passed away. He was so sad he did not know how she died” “Johnson” said  “she is old she might have been very sick. 

Johnson was trying to cheer up Byron he could not stop thinking about how much fun he had with his grandma. His grandma bought every single thing that Byron wanted. Byron looked after his grandma when she was sick.On the second day Byron didn't cry he remembered that he kept a photo of his grandma. He was happy he played with Johnson He asked Byron Are you still sad said Johnson? No I am not sad anymore said Byron.

“Why the long face?" asked Johnson are you hungry.Byron replied no thanks but i am sad because my friends are being mean to me.Why can’t you play with me we can play handball with my cousin said Jason , “Ok “.said Byron so they went and played with the ball and that's who Byron was happy.After they finish playing they went fishing for there dinner and there breakfest.

1 comment:

  1. your witting is alright but not that cool