Monday, 27 June 2016


Walt:listen,remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph.

last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner mm yummy mum makes the best meat bolls in the world my sister remarked.I eat lot of spaghetti ha-ha I laughed has my brother spelt sauce all over his white T-shirt. You've got sauce all over your face to my sister add I love mum when she makes  spaghetti.

My mark out of 10 is 5 

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